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heheheh

it was silly, but how come it wasnt blammed? im surprized

very good

i liked everything about that besides the lense glare (which felt very fake)

heh, nice

but how do you do that blurring effect?!!?!?!?!?!?!!?!? i cant figure it out for the life of me!

not bad, but could use some work

it was interesting looking, like it has potential, but i could hardly hear the guy when he spoke, maybe you should get a better sound recording system or you could just put in subtitles, now on to the graphics, it wasnt sooo bad, i could tel you spent a bit of time on this little 30 second preview, but it definatly wasnt top grade material, it looked like everything was made with the brush tool, if i am not mistaken(i duno what kamodiochi was thinking about it being hand drawn(twas mouse drawn, right?))

Mrshibbs responds:

I use the WACOM drawing tablet & the pen that comes with it, so basicly its hand drawn. so far the only other tool i used was, the line tool once at the beginning. im halfway done now, i've added 2 more scenes since the preview, and its looking great

meh

i dunno, wasnt all that great, made a smile on my face for like, 3 seconds, but then it was gone

on to the redemtion of your flash;
#1- while recordnig stuff (epecially voices/talking) make sure your not talking DIRECTLY into the mic, cuz if you are 2 things will happen, one, itll fuzz up and 2 youll be able to hear it when you release or intake air, now that could be fixed by holding hte mic 3 or 4 inches away from your mouth, usually to the right or left(just not underneath, cuz thats where yer exhailed carbon dioxide goes) and onto the visuals, werent TOO bad, i gave you a 6 on that cuz they were animated decently, but not very well drawn (since when are noses semi-circles?) and other proportionate problems with the human figure, now if you want to fix that, heh, you just gotta start drawing alot, the only thing thatll make you better is the combination of time and experiance
your aspec of humor wasnt too bad, but it wasnt exactly great either, funny cartoons these days (expecially flash) need several jokes in it, so maybe in later works by you well see improvements

very good

but the thingies coming in on the side every two seconds was annoying,
but other than that, i dunno what else i could critisize as far as a sprite would go, oh yea, the outcome was predictable

pretty good

your backrounds were amazing, but it felt like the actual animation was lacking.... of course this wont get really high reviews mostly because it was a teaser, so it kinda makes me interested, (but then again, summer is a wee bit far away)

aww man...

at first i was expecting some great big well done extremely smooth fbf animation with special light effects, big robots and extremely sexy woman, but it just turns out to be an above par wanabe- dbz cartoon :(

meh,

the storey reminded me of prince of persia : warrior within and the sound wasnt to amazing, neither was the rain.... i guess these things are easily fixable, and it could make people enjoy it more because it seems more lifelike

YEY!!!!!

HOORAY FOR MUSE!!! hehheheheh, im a big muse fan, and i loved that you used em' in yer video

*ahem* on to the improvements and whatnot
first off, your animation wasnt too great, but your art was kick arse! after a while tho (if you work at it) im sure your characters will flesh out and seem more human like, not just some big life size posters with some dude acting out the arms, but other than that, it was amazing!!! (and yey muse!)

Flash on baby! (oh yea, music and anime too)

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